06-23-2006, 11:53 AM
(scratching hair and smiling nervously)well thanks, I'll be sure to include characterization next time.The series you reveiwed was supposed to be for the first but got screwed over,so now i have to go back to the drawing board. its the other series 'After the D-Reaper' that needs a new series. the begining may be a cliche, but the rest is going to be different. as for Rika ordering wine, Part two for 'to the digital world' has it all layed out for what happened and how it happened.
Major thanks for pointing that out though wisemon, I could use some corrections. it would be a while for the stories to come in, reason is family, and summer school. this may be the only time until next monday and then some. mostly at night.
Major thanks for pointing that out though wisemon, I could use some corrections. it would be a while for the stories to come in, reason is family, and summer school. this may be the only time until next monday and then some. mostly at night.