02-07-2006, 07:24 AM
I stopped at the beginning of the sex scene, but what I did read I loved. That was absolutly fantastic, but I'm always uncomfortable reading about ladies. And writing about them, sometimes. First off; spelling a grammar. Hurray for you and your fantastical puntuation and ordered letters! Story; I rather liked that, it was sweet. I rarely enjoy first person accounts, asd I often feel that the author is just writing about their own fantasies about what they would do if they got their chance, but I didn't get that with you. I actualy cared for the character. That is brilliant, well done on an accomplished lemon.
Submit it to the main lemon page, here, too. Some visitors don't look at the boards, and I'd hate to deny the Small Gods a lemon as well crafted as this.
Submit it to the main lemon page, here, too. Some visitors don't look at the boards, and I'd hate to deny the Small Gods a lemon as well crafted as this.