Need help from a YAOI writer

[blueeyedgabulvo0o]

That fine line shouldn't be traversed or crossed that simply it makes it more sense if time is limited to use "cannon" characters that it is easier to clarify the situation and make the lemon more about the sexual relations. In my honest opinion, I like romance that makes you fall in love with and capture the essence of what that character is feeling throughout the piece. Falling in between the pages where you are no longer the reader but rather the character yourself...

Time is limited I would most likely concentrate on orgasmic frustration of two bodies knotted in passion, but if I have the time I build up the characters and light the candles around the tub and dive right in... :shock: :oops: ...

Interesting... yes no?

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lonelygabu~~
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