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04-03-2006, 08:48 AM (This post was last modified: 04-03-2006, 02:26 PM by Wisemon.)
I just read DV85's "Insomnia." It takes place within the Season 2 timeline, during the whole destiny stones thing. DV85 takes T.K.'s fear of losing Patamon and Cody's questioning of Matt about it directly from the series, a great ploy. The ending was not the way things went down in the series, which made it even better. I won't give it away, but let's just say that BlackWarGreymon fans won't like it. He was fairly accurate with the characterization of T.K. and Yolei, and the sex scene was very well written. It's great to see some of these stories starting to come into regular narration rather than script, and I hope that more people will view them this way. I give this story 9/10, imperfect due to grammatical errors and a somewhat choppy storyline.
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I hate writing shit; it is so stupid - by Wisemon - 10-12-2005, 01:33 PM
[No subject] - by Anonmon - 10-13-2005, 03:51 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 10-15-2005, 02:38 AM
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[No subject] - by Wisemon - 04-03-2006, 08:48 AM
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