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I hate writing shit; it is so stupid
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10-15-2005, 02:35 PM
Thanks, alright, E-Mon's "Return to the Past." It's an interesting concept, DigiDestined circa 2000 meeting DigiDestined circa 2004 (American timeline), but that's its best feature. Atrocious grammar and misspellings bring this story way down. Also, the plot is a little too fast to follow. Some more descriptions would be nice. Check that, they'd be necessary. My grade: 6/10.
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I hate writing shit; it is so stupid - by Wisemon - 10-12-2005, 01:33 PM
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