01-01-2005, 08:15 PM
Not bad at all! Held my interest.
Heh, I was wondering about the fur myself--considering that Veemon's forms are mostly Dragon types except for a few (Chibomon, DemiVeemon - Micro|Raidramon - Animal|Magnamon - Warrior (Still might be a Dragon type anyway) and that's not even counting the DNA form and up).
Keep up the good work, but be sure to improve the storyline! Only downside to this story is that the most exciting part that wasn't sexual was when Clarence got the Digivice. Doing good though!
Heh, I was wondering about the fur myself--considering that Veemon's forms are mostly Dragon types except for a few (Chibomon, DemiVeemon - Micro|Raidramon - Animal|Magnamon - Warrior (Still might be a Dragon type anyway) and that's not even counting the DNA form and up).
Keep up the good work, but be sure to improve the storyline! Only downside to this story is that the most exciting part that wasn't sexual was when Clarence got the Digivice. Doing good though!