12-01-2003, 07:47 AM
THE SCENE!!! *drops to his knees in awe* THE SCENE!!!
I don't think you did anything wrong, in fact I thank that was a really neat bit of writing! :D I'm getting the impression your writing skills have actually improved since you started writing this! Not that they weren't good to begin with...
So, yup, THE SCENE -- whichever one it is -- is a GOOD SCENE. ^^
I don't think you did anything wrong, in fact I thank that was a really neat bit of writing! :D I'm getting the impression your writing skills have actually improved since you started writing this! Not that they weren't good to begin with...
So, yup, THE SCENE -- whichever one it is -- is a GOOD SCENE. ^^