12-01-2003, 07:28 AM
Nice work agz, I like what you've done with the story, and the only thing I could say feels wrong about that last part was the fact that Tai fought to find Kari and then she says I'm going home and walks out, and Tai says and cries, I don't think he would have let her go, or would have a least followed...but still a compelling story and I want the rest!!!