08-23-2003, 02:15 AM
Quote:...this may be the worst-written scene so far. -_-
*kicks self*
The next one WILL be better...by the power of the LEMON, I swear it WILL BE!
I see, pointing to this comment, you are not happy with your work, but it remembers me on myself. I never like my lemons too.
Anyways I think it's the right way to be successful. ^_^
The scene is not that bad you think. It's pretty good done, like the whole lemon so far, no worries, you'll make it all great. I trust in your skill