05-25-2003, 12:49 PM
Though Digiartist's Domain continues to crank out some of the best lemons have ever seen, there is a problem lurking among that of lemon writers, and that is the fact that there is something missing from most lemons written, a plot. Even Lord Archive, or Red Rover, sometimes cannot make a plot that does little better than lead up to a sex scene, which takes up the majority of the lemon. Who has the stamina to have sex with people constantly, besides that of SNL's The Ladies Man Leon Phelbin?
Make a plot. Make the lemon interesting enough so that readers do not just skip to the sex scene. The sex scene of a lemon should not take up for than 1/3 of the lemon. Though it may take longer to put in a story, it shall pay off in the end when people read the ENTIRE thing...
Make a plot. Make the lemon interesting enough so that readers do not just skip to the sex scene. The sex scene of a lemon should not take up for than 1/3 of the lemon. Though it may take longer to put in a story, it shall pay off in the end when people read the ENTIRE thing...