05-25-2011, 01:39 PM
It's been a long time since I posted.
Pretty good story, but due to the formatting of the DaD and the width of the screen, it becomes an insurmountable wall of text that makes my eyes cross over. It'll be much easier on the eyes if you submit it to Inkbunny. Their formatting is far superior.
Other than that good stuff. I didn't really get interested until some time before they got onto the ship. I'll need to read it over again.
Pretty good story, but due to the formatting of the DaD and the width of the screen, it becomes an insurmountable wall of text that makes my eyes cross over. It'll be much easier on the eyes if you submit it to Inkbunny. Their formatting is far superior.
Other than that good stuff. I didn't really get interested until some time before they got onto the ship. I'll need to read it over again.
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