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(04-23-2011 09:13 AM)Lord Patamon Wrote: Quite good, and you may have broke Veemon more than once during the fic but hey, He got to lose his virginity with Gatomon so he can't complain much.

Though I wonder why if Gatomon wanted to be with Patamon she accepted to be on a relationship with Veemon in first place? that part left me confused.

Another thing that left me confused was that Veemon said he lost his virginity over thirty years ago with Gatomon but the year the fic takes place is 2020. Veemon appeared in 2002 meaning that he only had known Gatomon for 18 years, so where did you got the extra 12 years? o.o

For the whole "Gatomon" relationship thing. I picture that as she having second thoughts at first for Patamon, and going for Veemon, and then having second thoughts about Veemon and then staying with Patamon. There's a little bit more of it than that, but I don't really feel like writing THAT story, not... Right now, at least.

Well, it's kinda hard to explain, there's a lot of dimensional travels in this story. But, to explain in a way that doesn't spoil too much, this dimension and the digimon dimension (The one the series takes place in, not exactly the digital world) are separate dimensions, Veemon got to know her in 2002, sure, then there's the 25 years fast forward at the end of season 2, then, something made them come to this specific dimension at the year 2010, then they stayed around for 5 years (30 years knowning her in total) and then came the war, which lasted for 3 years (33), this story takes place 2 and a half years after the end of the war, in total, 35 years knowning her. I think that should explain.

And, I'm glad you liked it.


Also, someone kill me, I reread a little bit and just noticed that I kept saying that Veemon, a DRAGON type digimon, has fur.

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Gray desires. - by Sacchi - 04-10-2011, 01:11 PM
RE: Gray desires. - by Takatofan1986 - 04-12-2011, 07:49 AM
RE: Gray desires. - by Sacchi - 04-22-2011, 02:12 PM
RE: Gray desires. - by Frisk E. Coyote - 04-13-2011, 05:52 AM
RE: Gray desires. - by Takatofan1986 - 04-22-2011, 11:15 PM
RE: Gray desires. - by Lord Patamon - 04-23-2011, 09:13 AM
RE: Gray desires. - by Sacchi - 04-23-2011, 11:24 AM
RE: Gray desires. - by Lord Patamon - 04-23-2011, 12:36 PM