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#11
Ch. 1: Vivi’s Lucky Day, by DarkChibimon

Eiko was looking for Zidane after he left to go to Pandemonium.

“That Zidane! Always, running off when Dagger needs him the most.” Eiko said, looking for Zidane. A Malboro was watching Eiko.

I'll be honest, I'm pretty sure I named Garnet "Bitch" in my play-through. Good times.

“She will make a good meal.” The Malboro thought as it moves closer and closer to Eiko. Eiko wasn’t paying attention as the Malboro wrap one of its tentacles around Eiko`s foot.

Did I accidentally start reading every Japanese manga ever made or something?

“Huh?” Eiko said, looking down, seeing the Malboro`s tentacle, wrapped around her foot. The Malboro picked Eiko up by her foot and she let out a very loud scream.

Back in Bran Bal, Vivi heard Eiko’s scream.

“Eiko is in trouble! But can I do anything to save her…” Vivi thought, looking around for everyone else. Vivi couldn’t find anyone else to help him.

If only you could hurl fireballs at shit, but alas.

“I am the only one that heard that…Zidane said that anyone is in trouble, you should save him or her.” Vivi thought as he ran out of the village and see Eiko about to get eaten by a Malbro.

Malbros can be differentiated from Malboros by virtue of their backwards hats, irremovable sunglasses, and heavy use of the word "Dude".

“E-Eiko! H-Hold on! Firaga!” Vivi said, casting a Firaga spell on the Malbro, making it drop Eiko.

"Ow, dude! What the hell, brah?"

“Firaga!” Vivi said again, casting another Firaga spell on the Malbro as Vivi went into trance.

"Don't firaga me, bro!"

“Double Firaga!!” Vivi said, casting two Firaga spells on the Malbro, killing it.

Not only can you throw fireballs, you can throw TWO fireballs at the same time. Why were you doubting yourself again?

“E-Eiko, are y-you alright?” Vivi asked Eiko as she got up.

“Yeah, Vivi. I’m fine.” Eiko said.

“Should I kiss him, well he does deserve it.” Eiko thought, going close to Vivi, kisses him on the lips. Vivi blushed as he slowly kissed Eiko back. Eiko slowly breaks the kiss, blushing a bit.

What exactly is she kissing? I don't remember Vivi having a mouth.

“Vivi, you’re a great kisser.” Eiko said.

"Which is weird, because you don't have a mouth."

“Y-You too, Eiko.” Vivi said, moving his hat a bit. Eiko looked down at Vivi’s crotch.

“I wonder if Vivi has that thing like Zidane does.” Eiko thought, putting her gloved hand over Vivi’s crotch, slowly rubbing it.

Must.. not.. make.. black guy joke..

“E-Eiko! W-What are y-you doing!?” Vivi said as his cock started to tent his pants.

There it is again. When did "tent" become a verb?

“So he does have one, like Zidnae…What did Dagger do it at first…oh yeah!” Eiko thought, started to undo Vivi’s pants.

“W-What is Eiko doing…madey whatever Eiko is going to do, that porbly what made Zidane moaned, when we were on the airship.” Vivi thought, blushing deeply as his pants dropped to the ground, showing Eiko is black cock, throbbing lightly.

Hey, so it IS true.

Eiko blushed a bit. “Well, it’s smaller than Zidane’s thing…well here goes nothing.” Eiko thought as she goes down onto her knees, licking the head of Vivi’s cock, than puts it into her mouth.

Wait, that doesn't add up. Nevermind.

Vivi moaned, “Is this what happen to Zidane that night on the airship?” Vivi thought, he subcontly remove his robe as Eiko sucked more of Vivi’s cock. Vivi thrust a bit into Eiko’s mouth, hitting her gag reflex, making her gag a bit, she pull back to regain her breath before, sucking more of Vivi’s cock, switch made Vivi moaned even louder. Vivi’s cock started to leak precum, Eiko gagged on his precum a bit before drinking it down.

“It tasted like…a ether.” Eiko thought as she sucked harder on Vivi’s cock, making Vivi moans louder. Vivi started to sweat a bit from all the pleasure from his first blow-job ever. The pleasure was too much for Vivi as he moans loudly, unloading his cum into Eiko’s mouth, she drank down nearly all of it, only a bit of Vivi’s cum, slowly goes down her mouth and onto her chin.

Better let Vivi have some, he just used a bunch of MP on that monster.

“T-That…was…f-fun…Eiko…” Vivi said as he put his robe back on and started to pull on his pants. Eiko grabs Vivi’s hands, stopping him from pulling up his pants.

“Vivi, I want to try one more thing with you, alright?” Eiko said with a smile.

"I'd love to, but I have a.. thing to go to tomorrow. Oh man, it's getting late, I better get going."

“A-Alright.” Vivi said, pulling his pants back down, taking off his robe as Eiko started to take off her jumpsuit. Vivi blushed as he saw Eiko’s still developing breasts and hairless pussy.

“W-Wow, Eiko.” Vivi said, Eiko kisses Vivi on the lips, Vivi returns the kiss. Eiko lay down on her back with her legs spread apart.

“Vivi, put your thing into here.” Eiko said, pointing at her pussy.

"Well, alright!"

"I thought you said you had somewhere to be?"

"I do. Just, right after this."


“A-Alright, Eiko.” Vivi said, started to put his cock into Eiko’s pussy, breaking her hymen, making Eiko scream loud.

“E-Eiko, A-are you a-alright?” Vivi asked Eiko, worried.

"It's alright, I'll just heal myself up and restore my MP with your ether!"

“Y-Yeah…I’m Vivi…keep going…” Eiko said as blood as leaking from her pussy, on to Vivi’s cock, making it go red. Vivi nodded his head and started to pump in and out of Eiko’s pussy, moaning. Eiko started to moan along with Vivi.

“Vivi…faster.” Eiko said, looking right into Vivi’s eyes.

It sounds romantic until you realize his eyes are just yellow dots on a featureless black face.

“A-Alright, Eiko.” Vivi said, pumping his cock faster, making them both moaned louder.

“E-Eiko…you a-are so t-tight…” Vivi said, pumping faster, moaning louder.

“Vivi…so…big…” Eiko moaned, kisses Vivi on the lips, Vivi returned kiss on the lips. Vivi leak precum into Eiko’s pussy keeps thrusting. Eiko keeps moaning as her pussy leak precum onto Vivi’s cock.

Again with the lips. Where are these lips you speak of?

“E-Eiko, I’m n-need to g-go to t-the bathroom.” Vivi moaned, keeps pumping in and out of Eiko’s pussy. Eiko moans loudly, cumming all over Vivi’s cock witch set Vivi off as he moans loudly, cumming into Eiko’s pussy.

Now that I think about it, Black Mages ejaculating ether makes a lot of sense.

“T-That…was…f-fun….” Vivi said with a smile.

“Yeah…it…was…fun…Vivi…” Eiko said, kisses Vivi on the lips. Vivi returned the kiss on Eiko’s lips. Vivi slowly remove his cock from Eiko’s pussy, pulling his pants up and putting on his robe as Eiko is putting her jumpsuit back on.

"That was great- look at the time- big meeting gotta go bye."

“E-Eiko, I l-love you.” Vivi said with a smile.

“Vivi, I love you too.” Eiko said, hugging Vivi.

They don't know what parts of their own bodies are called, but they know what love is?

“Come on, Vivi! We need to find Zidane!” Eiko said, running off.

“R-Right, Eiko.” Vivi said, quickly following Eiko.

Wait a minute, this wasn't about Digimon at all! What the hell is going on here?
In soviet goggles, Russia does nothing.
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Asesino's Commentaries - by Asesino - 01-31-2011, 04:09 AM
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