yoshino pic (sorta old, not sure i posted it here though)

[Nate Hunter]

There is a problem I have noticed in a lot, if not all, of your work, where the chin is too sharp for the character in question. Although anime style tends to have sharper chins than the more realistic western style, it's still not a flat point -- at least in the Digimon style -- but rather a smooth curve. You tend to draw the chin too sharp, which though not a severe flaw for characters whose style dictates it as appropriate, is still something to consider when working with fan-art.

Aside from that it's fairly good.