07-25-2006, 05:41 PM
DragonMasterX Wrote:I've got a doubt, if Luciantmon is literally a giant, then how is that Patamon's knife actually can pierce all that muscle and skin and trespass to his guts? Moreover, just how much can that Patamon jump? I think it'd be too high for him.
In case you didn't get it, the knife didn't pierce as it only broke. Also Luciantmon isn't literally a giant, so an agile Digimon (in this case, Patamon) could jump over him.
Quote:Err... Hadn't Silvermon devolved into Redmon before this?
He re evolved soon after Gatomon appeared.
Quote:Notes: You are getting better at last, maybe you could boost your score if you indeed added something else for the porn, not something purely gorey including a body getting ripped apart by an humongous cock; I know it's part of the story, but besides that, you could also write another scene with the SANE characters you still have. Good job with this chapter :3
No one is sane in this series. Not even the "good guys". :D