07-25-2006, 11:15 AM
Well, Wisemon, I have read some of your poetry, I have to say that I like it really, though a bit too short and too the point if you ask me. People want to know that there is more to be known with each line closer to the end and so in writing longer, you give them suspense and allow for them to like the poem even more.Yours are short and I like them but, so straight and to the point almost as if you didnt have time to feel or express more.But, otherwise great job.Remember, everyones style of writing is different and a great poet can be any age.Good job, I hope to read more of your works.Oh, and Thesaurus's arent needed when it comes to poetry, poetry comes from the soul, thus no extra editing is needed, you make your poetry too formal and that can tend to make it boring. No offense because I like your poetry.