07-22-2006, 08:58 AM
I couldn't possibly have explained the plot any better than that. I especially liked the "knight" and "whore" part of the explanation. Of course, if Marine can't see a plot without the presence of firearms, body armor, and an excessively masculine original character, he's entitled to his plotless view.
As it happens, the series I'm working on now involves firearms and body armor. So hopefully, if Marine reads it, he might be able to find a plot.
As it happens, the series I'm working on now involves firearms and body armor. So hopefully, if Marine reads it, he might be able to find a plot.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against