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Better Late than Never: The June 2006 Lemon Contest
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07-22-2006, 12:19 AM
With all do respect Wisemon, in my view, Crimson's craft would have my better scores. And all do respects Nate and Herr Mullen and DMX for bringing this up after the contest.But I realized my critiques contrast differently than yours. Maybe it's because we have different judging motifs, or something that makes our reviews unique, and am thankful for that (no offense).


->That said, this story has no plot. I can't explain it any better. There's no conflict with the protagonist, just like in the movie, and if there was its transparent. Maybe Wisemon can help point me out in the right direction?
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[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 06-10-2006, 02:38 PM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 06-17-2006, 09:03 AM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 06-20-2006, 03:21 PM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 07-04-2006, 12:08 AM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-04-2006, 12:10 AM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-13-2006, 11:40 AM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-14-2006, 10:47 AM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-16-2006, 02:09 PM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-19-2006, 10:13 AM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-19-2006, 10:28 AM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-19-2006, 10:47 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 07-19-2006, 11:15 AM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-19-2006, 01:16 PM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 07-19-2006, 01:25 PM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-19-2006, 01:31 PM
[No subject] - by Crimson Fox - 07-19-2006, 02:27 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-19-2006, 08:28 PM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 07-20-2006, 09:26 AM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-20-2006, 09:45 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 07-20-2006, 10:27 AM
[No subject] - by Marine - 07-20-2006, 11:09 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 07-20-2006, 11:46 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 07-20-2006, 11:55 AM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-20-2006, 01:46 PM
[No subject] - by Marine - 07-20-2006, 01:49 PM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-21-2006, 03:44 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 07-21-2006, 12:57 PM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-21-2006, 03:14 PM
[No subject] - by Marine - 07-22-2006, 12:19 AM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-22-2006, 02:44 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 07-22-2006, 08:58 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 07-22-2006, 09:53 AM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-22-2006, 10:21 AM
[No subject] - by Knight of the new moon - 07-24-2006, 04:02 PM