07-20-2006, 04:40 PM
About your criticsm of the rape scene; Rapes really aren't nice (despite some people writing that the rape victims suddenly start getting off it) and I didn't want to portray it as anything but a shocking "oh my god, what are they doing!" As for how Veemon got in front of her, that was a mistake on my part for not adding that they forced to lie down.
Thanks from the indepth, I'll work out those errors and resend it to DAD.
Thanks from the indepth, I'll work out those errors and resend it to DAD.