It's Only Fair: Herr Mullen goes Under the Knife
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It's Only Fair: Herr Mullen goes Under the Knife
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07-20-2006, 12:28 PM
Quote:--> Writing: I like the 'Disclaimer' as you being narrated and all, however, if that is not your intent throughout the story, try to keep your comments to yourself and let the reader decide. Anything beyond the disclaimer has to be strictly story...I would ignore this criticism. That's part of your distinctive postmodernist style. ![[Image: AppealtoReason.jpg]](http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g100/baw01002/Album%20Covers/AppealtoReason.jpg) "I looked up and saw you; I know that you saw me. We froze but for a moment In empathy."-Rise Against |
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It's Only Fair: Herr Mullen goes Under the Knife - by Herr Mullen - 07-20-2006, 05:52 AM
[No subject] - by Marine - 07-20-2006, 07:26 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 07-20-2006, 12:28 PM
[No subject] - by Marine - 07-20-2006, 01:00 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-20-2006, 08:48 PM
[No subject] - by Master Grim - 07-20-2006, 10:21 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-22-2006, 10:25 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 07-22-2006, 03:18 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-23-2006, 04:45 AM
[No subject] - by Nate Hunter - 07-23-2006, 04:32 PM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 07-23-2006, 04:56 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 07-23-2006, 06:48 PM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 07-24-2006, 07:36 AM
[No subject] - by Master Grim - 07-25-2006, 09:07 PM
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