05-25-2006, 10:18 AM
So that's supposed to be Flamedramon from Alex's perspective, right? Since when does Flamedramon have retractable teeth (or claws)? It's not a bad start to a very long story, but I'm just not much of a fan of original characters. Your narrative perspective is well done.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against