05-03-2006, 02:02 PM
Heya Gabu...don't overlook that he said this:
In spite of his criticism, he did say that he thought it showed great potential. All it needs is just a little refinement and really, whose writing wouldn't benefit from a bit of retooling? ^_^
I think it shows promise too. As you rebuild your familiarity with the show and how the characters interact, I think your writing will feature a sharp increase in characterization. I feel that mine did between my first a second lemons (the first I hadn't watched a single ep since they were aired, the second one I had seen about 15 or so eps, and by the third I'd seen all of them and most of season 2). Just be patient with yourself. Like anything, it takes a while to refine a style that's truly your own but people also enjoy. Don't lose your zeal; you can do great things.
It takes guts to post up your own work on the web. Lord knows it took me about 4 or 5 tries to hit send in my hotmail to send my first lemon.
Anyway, if you have any further lemon ideas you wanna bounce off someone, you know that I'm here, bro. *snuggle*
Actually, that goes for anyone. Not like I'm saying that I'm a writing guru, but I'll at least give you an honest opinoin.
circeus Wrote:Beyond all that, though, I still see rather good writing and great potential. I hope you can polish your work better, because it looks like some hot stuff coming around.
In spite of his criticism, he did say that he thought it showed great potential. All it needs is just a little refinement and really, whose writing wouldn't benefit from a bit of retooling? ^_^
I think it shows promise too. As you rebuild your familiarity with the show and how the characters interact, I think your writing will feature a sharp increase in characterization. I feel that mine did between my first a second lemons (the first I hadn't watched a single ep since they were aired, the second one I had seen about 15 or so eps, and by the third I'd seen all of them and most of season 2). Just be patient with yourself. Like anything, it takes a while to refine a style that's truly your own but people also enjoy. Don't lose your zeal; you can do great things.
It takes guts to post up your own work on the web. Lord knows it took me about 4 or 5 tries to hit send in my hotmail to send my first lemon.
Anyway, if you have any further lemon ideas you wanna bounce off someone, you know that I'm here, bro. *snuggle*
Actually, that goes for anyone. Not like I'm saying that I'm a writing guru, but I'll at least give you an honest opinoin.