Just a quick comment before I start reading: please reduce the width of that separator line of "=". It stretches my 1024x800 screen.
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The story was great I can't comment too much on characterization, as I haven't seen epi 5 yet, but Gaomon hasn't struck me as anything like a verbose character yet. IIRC, his longest line so far was in the episode 3 preview.
I liked the small discussion at the end, although it sounded a big assumption that Kudamon would be a telepath.
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The story was great I can't comment too much on characterization, as I haven't seen epi 5 yet, but Gaomon hasn't struck me as anything like a verbose character yet. IIRC, his longest line so far was in the episode 3 preview.
I liked the small discussion at the end, although it sounded a big assumption that Kudamon would be a telepath.