05-03-2006, 02:01 AM
Reveiwers have a duty to be critical. The important thing is that you take these points on board and rectify them where you can. I'm sure you can learn something about tences and consistancy, at least. Don't expect a reveiwer to cushion the blow, however. It's a writer's duty to make the readers either enjoy his/her work or think about it; this peice's aim is to be enjoyed. Thus, all obsticals to the readers' enjoyment should be removed. Cirieus has listed the things that kept him from enjoying it; now its your job to remove all bars from his path of enjoyment. That is what feedback is.
A quick Google and I've found something to solve your Wordpad problems.
A free word processor. This is to Office what Firefox is to IE; the best alternative around. I'd recommend it, certainly.
Good luck with future projects; Cirieus does say you have potential. Hone your abilities; I veiw each lemon I write as an exercise. Work on a basis of posting, getting feedback, and acting on it and you'll soon be a good author. Have fun.
A quick Google and I've found something to solve your Wordpad problems.
A free word processor. This is to Office what Firefox is to IE; the best alternative around. I'd recommend it, certainly.
Good luck with future projects; Cirieus does say you have potential. Hone your abilities; I veiw each lemon I write as an exercise. Work on a basis of posting, getting feedback, and acting on it and you'll soon be a good author. Have fun.