A preview to my newest story (Zephyrmon/Flamedramon)

[DragonMasterX]

Tense issues. You switch back and forth between present and past at random.

I get what you say, I seem to write and not really look if I made a mistake with those because I think it's already ok- but thanks, now I know where I should reinforce.

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What you mean is that the whole 02 dimension should be another part of Sephirothmon with what you said Wise?

According to Megchan, the Japanese name for Mercuremon's beast spirit is actually Sefirotmon, but yes, that's what I'm saying. When you think about everything that would mean, it's a total mind fuck.

I may need to look at it better, because I saw that the name was Sephirothmon- but maybe I'm wrong. Anyways, I still need to think deeper that idea of the corelation between universes *rubs forehead with a paw* That's confusing me... I think I'm not going to play with matter transferring in my next story... x.x