05-02-2006, 10:34 AM
Tense issues. You switch back and forth between present and past at random.
A preview to my newest story (Zephyrmon/Flamedramon)
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A preview to my newest story (Zephyrmon/Flamedramon) - by DragonMasterX - 05-01-2006, 02:29 PM
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