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You create such a wonderful array of attacks and the fighting sequence seems amazing but your scenary tends to be a little back lined...You could create more imagery by adding simplistic angle changes....Make it seem like we are there and sense the whole thing occuring....and not only a fight, ok?! better word choices describing things to that is my opinion.......DMX
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