05-01-2006, 03:32 PM
DMX//////DMX.......
ummm....Let me start out by saying my grasp on digimon characters are limited the whole thing confused me a bit but after my third read it made sense,
The story and the battle was nicely written, I enjoyed the way the battles played out and how I hope there is plot for the upcoming sex scene.....My only complaint is use imagery a bit more and the setting to create the mood to your advantage, otherwise a very good beginning of a lemon.....Good job DMX! :P
ummm....Let me start out by saying my grasp on digimon characters are limited the whole thing confused me a bit but after my third read it made sense,
The story and the battle was nicely written, I enjoyed the way the battles played out and how I hope there is plot for the upcoming sex scene.....My only complaint is use imagery a bit more and the setting to create the mood to your advantage, otherwise a very good beginning of a lemon.....Good job DMX! :P
