05-01-2006, 02:52 PM
I have to admit that you sure are good at writing battle scenes, I really suck on that part, then again I haven't written much battle scenes on my fics so is natural that I'm not that good on that matter :P
About the grammar I didn't saw anything bad but then again I don't know much english grammar yet so is better than any of the other guys here with good english grammar point any possible details on your lemon. :)
I can't wait to see the final work, keep up the good work :D
About the grammar I didn't saw anything bad but then again I don't know much english grammar yet so is better than any of the other guys here with good english grammar point any possible details on your lemon. :)
I can't wait to see the final work, keep up the good work :D