04-06-2006, 06:14 PM
I like your London group, but have you ever visited England? A few cultural references, like you have with the Odiba chosen, wouldn't have been bad. When I read the London group, I didn't recognise England. It seemed just interchangable with France or Germany. In fact, whilst I read it, the images that came to my mind were of a Japanese district. I really, however, like your use of statistics. There is an absence of safe sex education in school, but I have never heard "You can't get pregant on a boat". Most teenagers want to express love for each other and see no barriers, like the possiblity of STDs, as far as I'm aware. I'm really enjoying the series, thanks a lot.