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Quote:When I first started out with my first lemon back in 2001 it wasn't script format but the quality was so crappy; one ''he said'' and ''she said'' after another. I abandoned it finding the script to be much more easier. I know I'm capable of doing it. Here's an example:
Oh, that little problem. Let me tell you how I've tried to get around that. Whenever possible, try to get the dialogue into the same paragraph as some of the character's actions. That way, the character who said the lines is clear without the use of the he said/she said portion. Also, there are a lot of alternatives to "said," depending on the situation. There's:
remarked, commented, exclaimed, shouted, hinted, whispered, inserted, interjected, thought, contemplated, considered, announced, declared, questioned, answered, decided, conjectured, hypothesized...You know, the possibilities are nearly unlimited in this language of ours.
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Happy 100 - by DV85 - 02-05-2006, 02:26 PM
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