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[Shadowknight]

I agree you need to separate the paragraphs they are too big, is really hard to read it

I've already went through and put spaces inbetween the paragraphs and will continue to do so.

Anyhow think you can add Patamon in future funs with Gatomon and Veemon? or maybe a Patamon/Gatomon/Slashmon? seeing as for what I read in that chapter of yours it seemed that Gatomon already had some fun with both Patamon and Veemon.

At least you put her thinking in search Patamon for a 2 on 1 but since she met Slashmon well she didn't had to search for Patamon :P

I would ask for a Patamon/Gatomon lemon scene (no threeway) but seeing as how Gatomon is somehow leaned more towards Veemon (as always in most of the times in 02 lemons :P) and now with Slashmon there too so better at leask ask you to give Patamon a chance for a fun with Gatomon even if is on a threeway :P

Patamon still creeps me out (no offense but he's frankensteiny) but ya gotta give the people what they want. One gato/pata is on the way.

Just a question, this series of yours will be just sex? I mean I didn't got to see any other plot besides Kari wishing have TK and Davis at the same time and Gatomon hunting for Veemon

I'm definately gonna try for a plot instead of just random sex scenes, I'm hoping to make it into a big series but with my short attention span we'll see.