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Need help from a YAOI writer
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First and foremost there are many things to be considered when dealing with any story, especially Yaoi you have the simple basics.

1) You have to figure out what characters to use and the characters angles, how the react toward the situation. (Nervous, first timers :cry: , manipulators, yifflicious lovers, etc.)
2) After you figure out the characters you have to deal with where it is that the lemon will take place i.e. at one of their houses, the park, the mall's bathroom, at the library, or wherever you could think of.
3) Now decide on the beginning on how the whole shi-bang will create the situation of the yumminess to occur later on.
4)After that, decide the ending so that you won't be rushed on the juicy details of the sex in between.
5)Finally spend time on writing the most important thing the sex part of it and make it creative and use interesting objects or positions that could make the story memorable. Remember to let loose and have a bit of fun.
6)For better organization draw a story board and if you want help in that department just e-mail me or something.
7)The most important step is revisions and additions, people will dwell on a word error and carry it in their back pocket to use it as a flaw devise, don't let that happen. If anything if you don't like the way the lemon is coming out don't be afraid to add things that could make it more interesting than ever.

Now dealing with Yaoi, you get to remember that ever author has something that could stand out that makes their stories their own. write about what hasn't been written about or a starnge circumstance that could be your own. I'll be happy to read whatever you come up with because it'll be your story...

Good luck at and have some fun with it....'

Think of something....different...

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Gabumon Loverz
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Need help from a YAOI writer - by Shadowknight - 12-10-2005, 03:15 PM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 12-10-2005, 03:21 PM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 12-10-2005, 03:29 PM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 12-10-2005, 03:37 PM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 12-10-2005, 03:42 PM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 12-10-2005, 03:57 PM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 12-10-2005, 04:03 PM
[No subject] - by DV85 - 12-11-2005, 08:42 AM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 12-11-2005, 08:57 AM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 12-11-2005, 12:30 PM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 12-11-2005, 01:07 PM
[No subject] - by senjuro - 12-11-2005, 03:31 PM
Let it be yours... - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 01-20-2006, 11:27 AM
[No subject] - by Gabumonfurry - 01-21-2006, 03:16 PM
It ain't dead yet... - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 01-21-2006, 03:44 PM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 01-22-2006, 12:36 AM
WHAAAAAATTTT!! - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 01-22-2006, 04:13 AM
[No subject] - by Gabumonfurry - 01-22-2006, 08:35 AM
[No subject] - by senjuro - 01-22-2006, 02:25 PM
True, very true... - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 01-22-2006, 02:47 PM