12-28-2005, 07:35 AM
in my defense while I was writing the first one I was pretty screwed up on morphine and stuff (I'm not a drug addict I injured my leg badly) but yeah even I thought it was pretty bad when I read it with a normal head. Thanks for the review I appreciate any criticism and next time I'll remember to go for more detail.
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