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Wisemon Wrote:Have you seen his last two Casanova lemons? Sonimon is right; they're terribly out of character for Daisuke, and fairly out of character for Miyako. I think Lord Archive has lost his touch, though he was overrated to begin with.

Actualy, no, I haven't; indeed, I only discovered them not a minute and perhaps a half ago, having checked the DHZ update. I read all of Lord Archive's work on the DaD.

Whilst he may be, as you say, over rated, I do enjoy reading Lord Archive's Red Detective series; he is one of the better fan faction writers out there. Seldom do I come across someone who can write at a consistant quality for so long, whilst moving the tale onward. Indeed, I know that I can't. I'm rather envious of his aptitute for length, his ability to recall personias and occasionaly exapand upon them, and his odd ability to leave me feeling slightly fuzzy inside.

I do not, however, credit his poetic imagination. It is so rare to come across a metaphor or similie in Lord Archive's works, that I believe the UN has put an official endangered species sanction on them.

He does not allow the story to stagnate, however, such as I have seen with other fan fiction writers, such as one who wrote a Harry Potter fiction with an original character called David (an immediate caution signal) where he and Harry got together and seemed to be in perpetual happyness; Lord Archive does not let Takeru and Hikari rest in a matromonial blanket of bliss, and he does give them some emotional grief with their relationship with that scene in the bathroom. That added credibility to the tale, in that it reflected that mood scaresly remain fixed in a perminant positive postion.

I shall proceed to read up on the series another day, I think.
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What's everyone been up to? - by DV85 - 10-10-2005, 11:38 AM
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