I can tell you why the end will never come

[Wisemon]

I just can't imagine Henry having an anger management problem.

He was inches away from slapping Suzie in "No Mon Is an Island." If you look carefully, his hand is drawn back and ready, and then he stops himself. In the same episode, he (as MegaGargomon) kicked the crap out of Zhuqiaomon. As a kicker, I know that it takes some anger to really want to attack that way.

Or Tomoki stealing.

In my version, he stays in the digital world for over a year, his comrades die, and he comes home to find that his parents have moved away and he has to fend for himself. Imagine what that would do to your psyche. You'd have a "survival of the fittest" mentality.

Or the Sovereign swearing at each other.

Azulongmon and Zhuqiaomon did get into a pretty big argument in Season 3 regarding trusting the humans. The swearing is because each one is supposed to use catchphrases that I've laid out for Takuya, Kouji, Junpei, and Izumi. I made Kouji into a swearer in my first series, and so it's true of Azulongmon. This also explains why Baihumon is a girl, though white tigers are often thought of as being feminine creatures anyway (the whole cat thing).

but only Jyou and Koushiro were willing to keep talking to him after the first thirty seconds."
Honestly I'm not suprised. (considering his personality sometimes and your writing style.)

Not to spoil too much, but Matt becomes a rock star, so he's too busy to talk. Anonmon, you won't like what Koushiro becomes.

homage to the Blue Stinger Beetleborg, or possibly The Tick,"
Wow I wonder how many people understand that? (you probally know as much useless trivia as I do.)

Just wait until I bring Kenta back into the story. He'll be supplying most of the useless hero trivia.

Clever, very clever.

I also particularly liked that passage. Tomoki is my easygoing character, somewhat based on you. Not that you'd steal, but under the right circumstances, we'd all do some "borrowing."