09-05-2011, 04:12 PM
Overall, I thought it was a well written story. I didn't see any real grammar mistakes and it flowed fairly well. The transformation scene was fairly sexy as well.
The story seemed a little goofy at times, but it wasn't meant to be serious so it makes sense.
Oh, and Spencer can burn in hell because she reminds me of Excella from Resident Evil 5. Damn I hate that bitch. D: But on the plus side, Spencer also reminds me of a James Bond villain, which makes me laugh and smile as well. :3
I'm curious what she'll do now that she's a huge turtle woman, but isn't bound to be a defender of nature like your last story.
The story seemed a little goofy at times, but it wasn't meant to be serious so it makes sense.
Oh, and Spencer can burn in hell because she reminds me of Excella from Resident Evil 5. Damn I hate that bitch. D: But on the plus side, Spencer also reminds me of a James Bond villain, which makes me laugh and smile as well. :3
I'm curious what she'll do now that she's a huge turtle woman, but isn't bound to be a defender of nature like your last story.
