03-03-2005, 05:23 PM
yeah i admit i was rushing myself a bit there and i do plan to re-do that chapter. and i hadnt planned to make Tyler a player cause i actually based that character round a person i know whos been going out with my best friend for the past 6 years.
i agree with the whole "i love you" thing, cause now i have reread it for the 4th time, the bit does sound a bit wrong so i will redo that.
i agree with the whole "i love you" thing, cause now i have reread it for the 4th time, the bit does sound a bit wrong so i will redo that.