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yeah i admit i was rushing myself a bit there and i do plan to re-do that chapter. and i hadnt planned to make Tyler a player cause i actually based that character round a person i know whos been going out with my best friend for the past 6 years.

i agree with the whole "i love you" thing, cause now i have reread it for the 4th time, the bit does sound a bit wrong so i will redo that.
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need a beta reader - by Archaon - 03-03-2005, 02:02 AM
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[No subject] - by Archaon - 04-21-2006, 05:01 AM