Gray desires.

[Sacchi]

So, I wanted to comment on this, and I hope this comes out the right way.

Furry stories arn't really my thing. Having said that, I was really bored and kind of curious, so i read it. Well most of it. And I had to tell you, other than a couple plot points that bugged me, This was extremely well written. Even though, like i said, I wasnt really into the Furry part of it, the depth plot kept me interested and I wanted to keep reading. so, great writing :D.

Didn't see this post before.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, for the plot points, this was rewritten so. many. freaking. times. I was pretty sure there would be a plot hole or two in it, as well as, like I said in the afterword, I'd like to make this a series, so leaving a few things mentioned here and there to actually explain them later was one of my top priorities.

Thanks for the compliment on the plot, by the way, it took me forever to think of this story as a whole (not just this specific writing), so I'm proud of actually seeing someone complimenting me for my hard work.