Cooking up some love. (Savers/Xros MILF Xrosover) <Here's to you Dragon>z

[The Reclaimer]

There are other minor, overlooked errors such as these throughout the fic, but like you said it needs to be perfected, so it's no big deal.

Yeah, there are plenty of those. Grammar is the bane of my existance, I'm just not that great at it.

Right up until there was a bulge against Natsuko's back. A light hint of foreshadowing could've prepared me to discard the possibility of Sayuri being a herm (or futa) in this fanfic; because, that dildo actually came outta nowhere.

Sayuri left the room to get the dildo, it's when she comes back that she has it. I tried to be intentionally subtle with it, maybe too much so.

Thanks for the input.