04-03-2010, 06:56 AM
(03-28-2010 04:35 PM)Psycho Backlasher Wrote: Oh my. Windragon and Flamedramon? EEEEEEEEEEEE!! XD How wonderful!
Aww thank you x3
(03-28-2010 09:02 PM)Guilmon and a shotgun Wrote: Its a good story, dispite having some irregularities in your grammar and punctuation, it's a very well written and thought out story.
Reminds me of those old storys on radio where the young maiden would be submissive to her darling gruff working man, although it has a bit of a modern twist on it. I like that.
Ohhh thank you *blushes* and I'm not much of a story typist but thanks for your critique. x3
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