12-24-2009, 10:55 AM
I'm going to give a bit of advice, because anything script based makes for an instant turn-off for some if not most people I've talked with.
I've skimmed through some of this, and I can't really judge this at this point...it's not the best thing in the world, but you tried. My best advice is to read through some other fanfics on this site, using Red Rover as an example...this guy knows how to write, and is one of my examples I go by constantly. Try writing like THAT, and see what it brings. Crimson Fox is another personal favorite of mine (especially a Renamon story he wrote for me awhile back...murr). I'll be posting some other work of mine later on down the line.
-Renafan
I've skimmed through some of this, and I can't really judge this at this point...it's not the best thing in the world, but you tried. My best advice is to read through some other fanfics on this site, using Red Rover as an example...this guy knows how to write, and is one of my examples I go by constantly. Try writing like THAT, and see what it brings. Crimson Fox is another personal favorite of mine (especially a Renamon story he wrote for me awhile back...murr). I'll be posting some other work of mine later on down the line.
-Renafan
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