help on an idea

[Guilmon and a shotgun]

Thanks, like i said anything from my suggestion can be used or snipped out, i don't really care i'm just happy to help ^^

Also, if you were thinking of compiling the story with some music, one way i can think of is to put ques for what song to play, when to play (what part of the song) and when to stop into your story so the reader can benefit from audio accompaniment whilst reading. It'd be very easy to do and readers have the choice of including music or not.