10-22-2009, 05:51 AM
Menu isn't a good choice of words with Mar around :3
Also, TC, your profile will look a lot sweeter if you abide by a correct reported speech. In other words, try to check if what you're writing makes any sense time-wise at all. I see you shifting between Present and Past so much it becomes a rather tedious job to keep myself glued to reading it with interest!
That said, I didn't read it all, but what Lost Requiem adviced you to do is pretty much how the job is done, yet it's not limited to that. A character may also be useful in two or three areas, but adding more and more attributes to them just starts making them boring. Balance is the key to making a good character <3
That's why my fursona can't take the bus or fit inside a car, too!
Also, TC, your profile will look a lot sweeter if you abide by a correct reported speech. In other words, try to check if what you're writing makes any sense time-wise at all. I see you shifting between Present and Past so much it becomes a rather tedious job to keep myself glued to reading it with interest!
That said, I didn't read it all, but what Lost Requiem adviced you to do is pretty much how the job is done, yet it's not limited to that. A character may also be useful in two or three areas, but adding more and more attributes to them just starts making them boring. Balance is the key to making a good character <3
That's why my fursona can't take the bus or fit inside a car, too!
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