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This is a birthday present for my friend. We're just friends, but I'm her only friend. The details of this are in another topic, and I'd rather not go into it. The point is, I put together an awesome poem. It has a very specific syllable and rhyme scheme, and a shit-load of other tricks. To get them all, you'll have to read it a few times. The "chorus" is based on the live version of Rage Against The Machine's "Freedom". I'm posting it here (as opposed to the Author's Domain) because it's non-Digimon, and because nobody visits the Author's Domain.



Your Gift To Yourself

You prefer the company of self.
Maintain it with the greatest of stealth.
I know why you
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"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
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I even hate you too, so fuck you - by Wisemon - 09-25-2004, 05:30 AM
[No subject] - by SchizoKat - 09-25-2004, 03:21 PM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 10-01-2004, 07:21 AM
[No subject] - by Hunter Dio Omega - 10-01-2004, 08:10 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 10-01-2004, 10:39 AM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 10-01-2004, 01:59 PM
[No subject] - by Hunter Dio Omega - 10-02-2004, 12:27 AM
[No subject] - by Anus Individual 20 - 10-02-2004, 03:22 AM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 10-02-2004, 01:17 PM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 10-06-2004, 12:00 PM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 10-06-2004, 02:28 PM