06-22-2009, 03:07 AM
(06-20-2009 07:45 AM)Guilmon and a shotgun Wrote: Nice comic, but you've got a few spelling mistakes:Oh okay I'll redo it when i get it in color x3
A: "He's taller me" should be "He's taller than me"
B: "in matter of fact" should be "As a matter of fact"
Apart from that, good work and keep it up!
Kaze in Necrom Kingdragon *when you seriously pissed him off*, yes it supposed to look that ugly. Be glad I kindna twitch it abit from this picture http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk281...ra_063.jpg and yes I thought that Ranshinn would be more like that when he gets angry. Plus it looked kindna cool to me heheheh. And yea that's Linear as a judicial angel to face off to distinguish Kaze; splitting the lands into two and put Kaze into slumber until Linvar was born but Kaze's kingdragon form does awaken if Linvar gets extremely hurt or was getting raped.
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