02-19-2009, 05:47 PM
Patamon broke character WAY too much for my liking. He frigging turned into davis for half the god damn story...
Nice writing, though you should probably do some biology study to find out where the Gspot is (I know where it is).
Dunno what else to say.
I don't HATE it, i do dislike certain parts of it though.
I guess on a scale of one to 10... I give this a 7.
-3 points on Patamon breaking character so much, but other then that, it was a fun read.
Keep up the good work .
Nice writing, though you should probably do some biology study to find out where the Gspot is (I know where it is).
Dunno what else to say.
I don't HATE it, i do dislike certain parts of it though.
I guess on a scale of one to 10... I give this a 7.
-3 points on Patamon breaking character so much, but other then that, it was a fun read.
Keep up the good work .
All things happen sooner or later, but one must remember, later eventually becomes sooner. - Me