Failed attempts at living simple lives are what keep me coming back to you

[blueeyedgabulvo0o]

On the side note of everything Wise, just letting you know Flogging Molly doesn't use bagpipes thats Dropkick Murphy's.

I knew that. I'm not sure which band I like better, but I do tend to confuse them. Neither makes me want to buy one of their CDs.

and as for your new song...Voice crack right at the end? x..x lol.

Yes, and quite intentional, a metaphor for the cure.

"It's malignant.........devotion."
b1 b2-b4 b5-b7 b8 (B=beat)

I think I get what you're saying. The "nant" is a hard sound, so separating it a bit from the next word could serve it well, but I think 8 beats (if I'm reading that right) is a bit much.

Ah then I understand why you voice cracked.

As for the last I was snapping my fingers quite fast. Probably not at the same tempo you were thinking. Its just to give the space between a bigger pause making your song sound more like a Broadway one liner. :P