Failed attempts at living simple lives are what keep me coming back to you

[blueeyedgabulvo0o]

The first par of the song makes me think of Flogging Molly for some reason. Like a drunken song of good ol' Irish Punk.

I wasn't sure at first, but I think you're right: Irish punk song, but more the fiddle type than the bagpipe type. When I get around to mixing the music, I'll keep that in mind.

On the side note of everything Wise, just letting you know Flogging Molly doesn't use bagpipes thats Dropkick Murphy's.

and as for your new song...Voice crack right at the end? x..x lol. As for the song I felt it seemed like a seasonal song of Christmas time for some odd reason.

The feel to it. Is rather interesting.
I have one thing that you should kind of tweak is that Malignant Devotion. The words themselves either need to be either spread apart like

"It's malignant.........devotion."
b1 b2-b4 b5-b7 b8 (B=beat)

Or just make it monotone kind of rebel sounding with a stronger end sound to it.