Failed attempts at living simple lives are what keep me coming back to you

[blueeyedgabulvo0o]

Just thought by speeding it up before hitting the line may be better for the first two and then left the way you have it on its weird syncopation scheme for the ending.

I could pretend I understand what you're saying and would try to remedy it, but I think my ears just aren't as keen as yours.

Anyway, onto the next one, a clever song about yearning and disappointment, perfect for the new year:

The first par of the song makes me think of Flogging Molly for some reason. Like a drunken song of good ol' Irish Punk.

As to my comment prior, just meant try to speed up the last lines of where I mentioned in the song faster instead of cutting it down half the normal speed for the first two times and leave it the way it is for the third.

This song was interesting, and would be perfect for Irish Punk music. Nice way to end the year Wise.